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Alas! I wonder if my need will be delayed,

ألا ليت شعري هل تؤخر حاجتي

1. Alas! I wonder if my need will be delayed,
When gratitude from you is more fitting than praise.

١. ألا ليت شعري هل تؤخَّرُ حاجتي
لأوْلى بشكرٍ منك أو بثناءِ

2. You planted a hand until when its fruit came,
It complained of neglect and prolonged estrangement from you.

٢. غرستَ يداً حتى إذا آنَ حملُها
شكتْ منك إغفالاً وطولَ جفاءِ

3. My praise of you is unmatched, so make it
Everlasting by what you build and its enduring existence.

٣. ثنائيَ لا تُسبَق إليه فإنه
خُلودٌ لما تَبنِي وطولُ بقاءِ

4. And fulfill the hand you extended so that tomorrow
Its gratitude grows among the people however it grows.

٤. وتَمِّم يداً أَسْديْتَها يَنْمَ شكرُها
غداة غدٍ في الناس أيَّ نَماءِ

5. By my life, Mahmoud has given you his praise,
A prince who became one of the leading princes.

٥. لعمري لقد أعطاك محمودَ حمدِه
أميرٌ غدا من سادة الأمراءِ

6. And oh, the beauty of that praise, if you weigh it
Against the praise of a leading poet among leading poets.

٦. ويا حسنَ ذاك الحمدِ إن أنت زِنْتَهُ
بحمدِ إمرىءٍ من سادة الشعراءِ