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I have fallen between deprivation and pretentiousness

أصبحت بين خصاصة وتجمل

1. I have fallen between deprivation and pretentiousness
And a man between them dies frail

١. أصبحتُ بين خصاصةٍ وتجمُّلٍ
والمرءُ بينهما يموتُ هزيلا

2. So extend to me a hand whose palm is accustomed
To giving drinks and whose back is accustomed to kissing

٢. فامددْ إليَّ يداً تعوّدَ بطنُها
بذلَ النّوالِ وظهرُها التقبيلا

3. The lands have sprouted next to Your servant thriving
So prepare for Your servant in Your vastness a resting place

٣. نبتِ البقاعُ بجنب عبدِكَ ضاحياً
فامهدْ لعبدك في ذَراك مَقِيلا

4. And grant him shade after its passing
Your shade will never disappear as long as You give life to the frail

٤. وأفي عليه الظلَّ بعد زوالهِ
لا زال ظِلُّكَ ما حييتَ ظليلا