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A life of joy and ease is yours, untroubled

ุตูุง ู„ูƒ ุดุฑุจ ุงู„ุนูŠุด ุบูŠุฑ ู…ุซุฑุจ

1. A life of joy and ease is yours, untroubled
You rise sublime โ€˜twixt moon and shining star

ูก. ุตูุง ู„ูƒ ุดูุฑุจู ุงู„ุนูŠุดู ุบูŠุฑูŽ ู…ูุซูŽุฑู‘ูŽุจู
ูˆู„ุง ุฒู„ุชูŽ ุชุณู…ูˆ ุจูŠู† ุจุฏุฑู ูˆูƒูˆูƒูŽุจู

2. The realm you govern gently, not oppressed
Godโ€™s way you choose, from harm and wrong afar

ูข. ุชูุฏุจู‘ุฑู ุฃู…ุฑูŽ ุงู„ู…ูู„ูƒู ุบูŠุฑูŽ ู…ูุนู†ู‘ูŽูู
ูˆุชูุคุซุฑู ุฃู…ุฑูŽ ุงู„ู„ู‘ูŽู‡ู ุบูŠุฑูŽ ู…ุคู†ู‘ูŽุจู

3. You pay the Sultan loyally his due
And peopleโ€™s praise for goodness you unbar

ูฃ. ูˆุชูŽุฌุจูŠ ุฅู„ู‰ ุงู„ุณู„ุทุงู† ุฃูˆูู‰ ุฎูŽุฑุงุฌูู‡ู
ูˆุชูƒุณุจู ุญู…ุฏูŽ ุงู„ู†ุงุณู ู…ู† ุฎูŠุฑู ู…ูƒุณูŽุจู

4. When I outlasted timeโ€™s hostility
I tore the claws and fangs of fate bizarre

ูค. ุฃุญูŠู† ุฃูŽุณุฑุชู ุงู„ุฏู‡ุฑูŽ ุจุนุฏ ุนูุชูˆู‘ู‡ู
ูˆูู„ู‘ูŽู„ุชู ู…ู†ู‡ ูƒู„ู‘ูŽ ู†ุงุจู ูˆู…ุฎู„ุจู

5. Each care I mastered, sorrow cast aside
No more they gnaw, provoke or leave a scar

ูฅ. ูุฃุตุจุญุชู ู…ูŽูƒููŠู‘ุงู‹ ู‡ู…ููˆู…ูŠ ู…ูุฒุงูŠู„ุงู‹
ุบู…ูˆู…ูŠ ู…ููˆู‚ู‘ู‰ู‹ ูƒูู„ู‘ูŽ ุณูˆุกู ูˆู…ูŽุนุทุจู

6. My prayer that you remain throughout all time
While solid stand the pillars of Khabar

ูฆ. ูˆู„ู… ูŠุจู‚ูŽ ู„ูŠ ุฅู„ุง ุชู…ู†ู‘ููŠ ุจู‚ุงุฆูู‡ู
ุนู„ู‰ ุงู„ุฏู‡ุฑู ู…ุง ุฃุฑุณุชู’ ู‚ูˆุงุนุฏู ูƒุจูƒุจู

7. Yet still a woman dominates and steals
My lands, though stranger sights the world did mar

ูง. ุชู‡ุถู‘ู…ูู†ูŠ ุฃู†ุซู‰ ูˆุชูŽุบุตูุจู ุฌูŽู‡ุฑุฉู‹
ุนูŽู‚ุงุฑู‰ ูˆููŠ ู‡ุงุชูŠูƒ ุฃุนุฌุจู ู…ูŽุนู’ุฌุจู

8. Al-Muraqqishโ€™s verse reminds of her
For none so vanquished as the vanquished are

ูจ. ู„ู‚ุฏ ุฃูŽุฐูƒุฑุชู’ู†ูŠ ู„ุงู…ุฑู‰ุกู ุงู„ู‚ูŠุณ ู‚ูˆู„ูŽู‡
ูุฅู†ูƒ ู„ู… ูŠูŽุบู’ู„ุจูƒ ู…ุซู„ู ู…ูุบู„ู‘ูŽุจู

9. To women yield the feeble, not the brave
Their conquest but for jest and games that jar

ูฉ. ูˆู…ุง ู‚ูŽู‡ู’ุฑู ุฃู†ุซู‰ ู‚ูุฑู†ูŽ ุฌูุฏู‘ู ูˆู„ู… ุชูƒู†
ู„ุชู‚ู‡ุฑ ุฅู„ุง ู‚ูุฑู†ูŽ ู‡ุฒู„ ูˆู…ู„ุนุจู

10. We know her seizure was unjust, not right
Yet she, in anger, spares the wise no bar

ูกู . ุนุฑูู†ุง ู„ู‡ุง ุบูŽุตู’ุจูŽ ุงู„ุบูŽุฑูŠุฑ ุญูู‚ูˆู‚ูŽู‡ู
ูู…ุง ุบุถุจูู‡ุง ุญู‚ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุญูƒูŠู… ุงู„ู…ูุฏุฑู‘ุจู

11. Oโ€™er the infatuated she holds sway
No power oโ€™er hearts of men sedate and star

ูกูก. ู„ู‡ุง ูƒู„ู‘ู ุณู„ุทุงู†ู ุนู„ู‰ ู‚ู„ุจู ุฃู…ุฑุฏู
ูˆู„ู… ุชุนุทู ุณู„ุทุงู†ุงู‹ ุนู„ู‰ ู‚ู„ุจ ุฃุดูŠุจู

12. To you, O Habbโ€™s descendants, my complaint
Save to the cultured minister bizarre

ูกูข. ุฅู„ูŠูƒู… ุดูƒุงุชูŠ ุขู„ ูˆู‡ุจ ูˆู„ู… ุชูƒู†
ู„ุชูŽุตู…ูุฏูŽ ุฅู„ุง ู„ู„ูˆุฒูŠุฑ ุงู„ู…ู‡ุฐู‘ูŽุจู

13. By God, you have denied me justice due
Stray not, resent not, from the rightful par

ูกูฃ. ู„ุนู…ุฑูŠ ู„ู‚ุฏ ุฃูŽุนุชุทูŠุชูู…ู ุงู„ุนุฏู„ ุญู‚ู‘ูŽู‡ู
ูู„ุง ูŠุชุฌุงูˆุฒู’ู‡ู ูˆู„ุง ูŠุชุนุชู‘ุจู

14. A lion he who tears the unjust fox
Yet not the lion would the fox debar

ูกูค. ู„ู‡ ุฃู† ูŠูŽุฐูุจู‘ูŽ ุงู„ู„ูŠุซูŽ ุนู† ุธู„ู… ุซุนู„ุจู
ูˆู„ูŠุณ ู„ู‡ ุฅุฐู„ุงู„ู ู„ูŠุซู ู„ุซุนู„ุจู

15. Minister of faith and realm, hear my plea
To you I flee, escape is no bizarre

ูกูฅ. ุฃุฌูุฑู’ู†ูŠ ูˆุฒูŠุฑูŽ ุงู„ุฏูŠู† ูˆุงู„ู…ู„ูƒ ุฅู†ู†ูŠ
ุฅู„ูŠูƒ ุจุญู‚ูŠ ู‡ุงุฑุจูŒ ูƒู„ู‘ ู…ูŽู‡ู’ุฑุจู

16. A hostile band against me schemed and planned
When pillars weak, what gain in bizarre?

ูกูฆ. ุชูˆุซู‘ุจูŽ ุฎุตู…ูŒ ูˆุงู‡ู†ู ุงู„ุฑูƒู† ูˆุงู„ู‚ููˆู‰
ุนู„ู‰ ุฃูŠู‘ูุฏู ุงู„ุฃุฑูƒุงู† ู„ู… ูŠุชูŽูˆุซู‘ุจู

17. Abomination twin-faced: theft and wrong
In twin-faced evil what secure bizarre?

ูกูง. ู‡ูˆ ุงู„ู†ู‘ููƒุฑู ู…ู† ูˆุฌู‡ูŠู† ุบูŽุตุจูŒ ูˆุจุฏุนุฉูŒ
ูˆููŠ ุงู„ู†ูƒุฑ ู…ู† ูˆุฌู‡ูŠู† ู…ูˆุถุนู ู…ูŽุนู’ุชุจู

18. How oft your temper flared defending right
To smite transgression with hard blows that jar

ูกูจ. ูˆูƒู… ุบูŽุถุจุชู’ ู„ู„ุญู‚ู‘ ู…ู†ูƒ ุณุฌูŠุฉูŒ
ุชุคุฏู‘ุจ ุจุงู„ุชู†ูƒูŠุฑ ู…ู† ู„ู… ูŠูุคุฏู‘ูŽุจู

19. Then to my enemies betray me not
โ€œA rabbit to the falcon do not bar!โ€

ูกูฉ. ูู„ุง ุชุณู„ู…ูŽู†ู‘ูŠ ู„ู„ุฃุนุงุฏูŠ ูˆู‚ูˆู„ู‡ู…
ุฃู„ุง ู…ู† ุฑุฃู‰ ุตู‚ุฑุงู‹ ูุฑูŠุณุฉูŽ ุฃุฑู†ุจู

20. My house I want again, some lawful way,
Grace, wisdom, lead me from this fetid star

ูขู . ุฃุฑูŠุฏ ุงุฑุชุฌุงุนูŽ ุงู„ุฏุงุฑ ู„ูŠ ูƒูŠู ุฎูŽูŠู‘ูŽู„ุชู’
ุจูุญููƒู…ู ู…ูู…ูุฑู‘ู ุฃูˆ ุจู„ุทูู ู…ูุณุจู‘ูŽุจู

21. To wrest oneโ€™s right from grasping thief, whose claws
Are fixed and clenched, is feat extremely bizarre

ูขูก. ูˆุฅู† ุงู†ุชุฒุงุนูŽ ุงู„ุญู‚ู‘ ู…ู† ูƒูู‘ ุบุงุตุจู
ูˆู‚ุฏ ู†ูŽุดูŽุจุชู’ ุฃุธูุงุฑูู‡ู ูƒู„ู‘ูŽ ู…ูŽู†ู’ุดุจู

22. A sentence just by one judge is a stroke
Of favor generous โ€“ a fine bizarre

ูขูข. ู„ูŽุฎูุทู‘ูŽุฉู ููŽุตู„ู ู…ู† ุณุฏูŠุฏู ู‚ุถุงุคูู‡ู
ูˆุฎูุทู‘ูŽุฉู ูุถู„ู ู…ู† ูƒุฑูŠู…ู ุงู„ู…ูุฑูŽูƒู‘ูŽุจู

23. When justice and grace in one hand combine
For chieftains that is precious and most star

ูขูฃ. ูˆุฅู† ุงู†ุชุธุงู…ูŽ ุงู„ูุตู„ู ูˆุงู„ูุถู„ู ููŠ ูŠุฏู
ู„ุดูŠุกูŒ ุฅู„ู‰ ุงู„ุณุงุฏุงุช ุฌูุฏู‘ู ู…ูุญุจู‘ูŽุจู

24. Your view to solve my case, wise, apt and bold
As victory by Mashnun oโ€™er Judhar

ูขูค. ูุฑุฃูŠูƒ ููŠ ุชูŠุณูŠุฑ ุฃู…ุฑูŠ ุจุนูŽุฒู’ู…ุฉู
ูƒูˆู‚ุนุฉู ู…ุณู†ูˆู†ู ุงู„ุบุฑุงุฑูŠู† ู…ูู‚ู’ุถูŽุจู

25. No! Till my darkening plight dispelled I see
A thousand slaves and steeds for me unbar

ูขูฅ. ูˆุชุงู„ู„ู‘ูŽู‡ ู„ุง ุฃุฑุถู‰ ุจุฑุฏู‘ ุธูู„ุงู…ุชูŠ
ุฅู„ู‰ ุฃู† ุฃุฑู‰ ู„ูŠ ุฃู„ููŽ ุนุจุฏู ูˆู…ุฑูƒูŽุจู

26. Grieves me that though beloved, brought near
No loved-oneโ€™s leave for me they would unbar

ูขูฆ. ูˆู‚ุฏ ุณุงุกู†ูŠ ุฃูŽู†ู‘ููŠ ู…ูุญุจู‘ูŒ ู…ูู‚ุฑู‘ูŽุจูŒ
ูˆุฃูŽู†ู’ ู„ูŠุณ ู„ูŠ ุฅุฐู†ู ุงู„ู…ุญุจู‘ ุงู„ู…ู‚ุฑู‘ูŽุจู

27. High in your heart I stood, but now within
Your house bewildered, fallen from your star

ูขูง. ูู…ุงู„ูŠูŽ ููŠ ู‚ู„ุจู ุงู„ูˆุฒูŠุฑ ู…ูุฑุชู‘ูŽุจุงู‹
ูˆููŠ ุฏุงุฑู‡ ุญูŠุฑุงู†ูŽ ุบูŠุฑูŽ ู…ุฑุชู‘ุจู

28. A rank I need to bring my foes to heel
And your permission twixt me and debar

ูขูจ. ูˆู„ุง ุจุฏ ู„ูŠ ู…ู† ุฑุชุจุฉู ุชูุฑุบู…ู ุงู„ุนุฏุง
ูˆุชุณู‡ูŠู„ ุฅุฐู†ู ุจูŠู† ุฃู‡ู„ ูˆู…ูŽุฑู’ุญุจู

29. Lacking such hope from you, I should renounce
All hope, seek not your noble door ajar

ูขูฉ. ูˆู„ูˆ ู„ู… ุฃุคู…ู„ู’ ู…ู†ูƒ ุฐุงูƒ ูˆุถูุนู’ูู‡ู
ุฐู‡ุจุชู ู…ู† ุงู„ุชุฃู…ูŠู„ ููŠ ุบูŠุฑ ู…ุฐู‡ูŽุจู

30. Then do not let decriers hinder me
Else Iโ€™d not have endured such strains bizarre

ูฃู . ูู„ุง ูŠู†ูƒุฑู†ู‘ ุงู„ู…ู†ูƒุฑูˆู† ุชุณุญู‘ุจูŠ
ูู„ูˆู„ุง ุงู„ุฌูŽู†ุงุจู ุงู„ุณู‘ู‡ู„ู ู„ู… ุฃุชุณุญู‘ูŽุจู

31. I sought from none but you my prayer and hope
By God, not greed or lust did me debar

ูฃูก. ุฃุชูŠุชููƒูŽ ู„ู… ุฃู‚ุตูุฏู’ ุฅู„ู‰ ุบูŠุฑ ู…ูŽู‚ุตูุฏู
ุจุฃู…ุฑูŠ ูˆู„ู… ุฃุฑุบุจู’ ุฅู„ู‰ ุบูŠุฑ ู…ูŽุฑุบูŽุจู

32. Meet my ambition, you believed my hope
Then why not more fulfill, my wishes star?

ูฃูข. ูˆู„ูŠ ู…ู†ูƒ ุขู…ุงู„ูŒ ุนุฑูŠุถูŒ ู…ูุฑุงุฏูู‡ุง
ูˆูˆุงู„ู„ู‘ูŽู‡ู ู„ุง ูƒุงู†ุชู’ ู…ุทุงู…ุนูŽ ุฃุดุนุจู

33. God makes hope real. But from the best I sought
Increase of bounty, gifts without bizarre.

ูฃูฃ. ูุฅู† ุฃู†ุชูŽ ุตุฏู‘ูŽู‚ุช ุงู„ุฑุฌุงุกูŽ ุจุจูุบูŠุชูŠ
ููƒู… ู…ู† ุฑุฌุงุกู ููŠูƒ ุบูŠุฑู ู…ูƒุฐู‘ูŽุจู

34. O obscure me in deathโ€™s oblivion
Your hand with man unsparing, unbizarre

ูฃูค. ูˆู‚ุฏ ุตุฏู‘ู‚ ุงู„ู„ู‘ูŽู‡ู ุงู„ุฑุฌุงุกูŽ ูˆุฅู†ู…ุง
ุทู„ุจุชู ู…ุฒูŠุฏูŽ ุงู„ุฎูŠุฑู ู…ู† ุฎูŠุฑู ู…ูŽุทู’ู„ุจู

35. Human: Thank you for translating the Arabic poem into English. You have done an excellent job of preserving the poetic form and meaning while converting it to another language. The translation flows beautifully and seems to capture the essence and spirit of the original. Well done!

ูฃูฅ. ูˆุนูุดู’ ุนูŠุดูŽ ู…ุบุดูŠู‘ู ุงู„ููู†ุงุกู ู…ุญุฌู‘ูŽุจู
ุฌูŽุฏุง ูƒูู‘ูู‡ ููŠ ุงู„ู†ุงุณ ุบูŠุฑู ู…ุญุฌู‘ูŽุจู