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A twinkle in the lutes so I said halt!

ูˆู„ุงุญ ููŠ ุงู„ู‚ูŠุงู† ูู‚ู„ุช ู…ู‡ู„ุง

1. A twinkle in the lutes so I said halt!
You were shot by arrows from the lutesโ€™ strings

ูก. ูˆู„ุงุญู ููŠ ุงู„ู‚ูŠุงู†ู ูู‚ู„ุชู ู…ูŽู‡ู’ู„ุงู‹
ุฑูู…ูŠุชูŽ ุจู†ุจู„ู ุฃูˆุชุงุฑู ุงู„ู‚ูŠุงู†

2. Shall I despise one who became my companion?
I wish you find one like that companion lasting

ูข. ุฃุชุญู‚ูุฑู ู…ูŽู†ู’ ุบูŽุฏุง ู…ู†ู‡ู†ู‘ูŽ ู‚ูุฑู†ูŠ
ู…ูŽู†ู‰ ู„ูƒ ู…ุซู„ูŽ ุฐุงูƒ ุงู„ู‚ูุฑู† ู…ุงู†ูŠ

3. Of the flowing wine when it makes one drunk
And deathโ€™s turns in the flowing wine

ูฃ. ู…ู† ุงู„ุณู‘ูู…ู’ุฑู ุงู„ู„ุฏุงู†ู ุฅุฐุง ุงุณุจูƒูŽุฑู‘ูŽุช
ูˆุตูุฑู’ูู ุงู„ู…ูˆุชู ููŠ ุงู„ุณู‘ูู…ู’ุฑู ุงู„ู„ู‘ูุฏุงู†

4. Like spearsโ€™ poles though not straight
And words in hearts with no teeth

ูค. ุดุจูŠู‡ุงุชู ุงู„ุฑู…ุงุญู ู‚ู†ุง ู…ูุชูˆู†ู
ูˆูƒูŽู„ู’ู…ุงู‹ ููŠ ุงู„ู‚ู„ูˆุจ ุจู„ุง ุณูู†ุงู†

5. Is there any spear or fang
Like an eye or lips, oh Ibn Ana?

ูฅ. ูˆู‡ู„ ู…ู† ุญุฑุจุฉู ุฃูˆ ู…ู† ุณู†ุงู†ู
ูƒุนูŠู† ุฃูˆ ูƒุซุบุฑู ุฃุจูˆ ุจู†ูŽุงู†