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I saw a man dye his hair when it turned gray

رأيت خضاب المرء عند مشيبه

1. I saw a man dye his hair when it turned gray
Like mourning clothes worn over youth's ripped seam

١. رأيتُ خضابَ المرء عند مشيبه
حِداداً على شرخ الشبيبة يُلْبَسُ

2. Else, why would a man bother to dye his hair
Hoping to conceal sneaked-in grayness, it would seem

٢. وإلا فما يُغري امرءاً بخضابه
أيطمع أن يَخفى شَبابٌ مُدَلَّسُ

3. How could the gray-haired hide that he has dyed
When every third morning his roots breathe free

٣. وكيف بأن يَخفى المشيبُ لخاضب
وكل ثلاث صبْحُه يتنفّسُ

4. Grant him water to hide his grayness, where is it
Where is the smooth-soft skin of youth to see

٤. وهبْه يُوارِي شَيْبَه أين ماؤُهُ
وأين أديمٌ للشبيبة أملسُ