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A gentle apparition visited me and vanished,

قالت لطيف خيال زارني ومضى

1. A gentle apparition visited me and vanished,
Leaving in my heart the greatest yearning.

١. قالَت لَطيفَ خَيالٍ زارَني وَمَضى
مُخلِفاً في فُؤادي أَعظَمَ الكَمَدِ

2. If you truly saw him in a year,
For God's sake, describe him, do not subtract or add.

٢. إِن كُنتَ حَقّاً لَهُ أَبصَرتَ في سَنِةٍ
بِاللَهِ صِفهُ وَلا تَنقُص وَلا تَزِدِ

3. You saw him - if he died of thirst
On raging flames kindling in the heart,

٣. فَقالَ أَبصَرتَهُ لَو ماتَ مِن ظَمَأ
عَلى لَهيبٍ جَوى في القَلبِ مُتَّقِدِ

4. And water closer than the eye of his beloved,
Still he would refuse the water's coming.

٤. وَالماءُ أَقرَبُ مِن عَينٍ لِحاجِبِها
وَقُلتُ قِف عَن وُرودِ الماءِ لَم يُرِدِ

5. You speak truly - constancy in love is his habit,
And how much patience he has to endure torment!

٥. قالَت صَدَّقتَ وَفاءَ الحُبِّ عادَتَهُ
وَكَم لَهُ في اِحتِمالِ الوَجدِ مِن جَلَدِ

6. So I said, and the honey that seems to me
In her words, "Oh, the chill that gripped my liver!"

٦. فَقُلتُ وَالشَهدُ مَن فيها يُخَيَّلُ لي
يا بَردَ هَذا الَّذي قالَت عَلى كَبِدي