Feedback

I still drink it while the night grows dark

ما زلت أشربها والليل معتكر

1. I still drink it while the night grows dark
Until the moon smiles through the folds of its skirt.

١. ما زلت أشربُها والليلُ مُعتكرٌ
حتى تضاحكَ في أعجازه القَمَرُ

2. Then I leaned upon my palms for I was seized
By that which lies not in the power of thought to divert.

٢. ثم انثنيت على كفي وقد أخذت
مني مآخذ ما في دونها وطَرُ