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My dark complexion I blame on my love for the fair maidens;

وأسمر ذنبي للعواذل حبه

1. My dark complexion I blame on my love for the fair maidens;
A sin for which I feel no repentance or shame.

١. وأَسمرَ ذَنْبي للعواذلِ حُبُّهُ
وذلك ذنبٌ لست منه بتائبِ

2. I've been chastised for loving one whose rosy flushed lips
Have faded and lost their bright verdant hue.

٢. عُذِلْتُ على حُبِّي له حينَ ذَبَّلَتْ
له الشفةُ اللمياءُ خُضْرَةَ شارب

3. Once I adored her fine arched eyebrows, but now there are three;
How could I not help but pull back in dismay?

٣. وقد كنتُ أَهوى الحاجبين الَّلذَيْ لَهُ
فكيف وقد صارتْ ثلاثَ حواجب