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Even if I had composed my poetry with gravity

ولو أنني وقرت شعري وقاره

1. Even if I had composed my poetry with gravity
And not acted haughtily above my station and position

١. ولو أنني وقّرتُ شعري وَقارَهُ
ولم أترفّعْ عن مكاني وموْضعي

2. I would have considered it too bold to cast a glance at you
So exalted you are in my eyes that I dare not point a finger

٢. لأكبرتُ أن أومي إليك بنظرةٍ
لعُظْمِكَ عندي أو أشيرَ بأصبَعي