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She said there was fear between us and cried because of it

قالت مخافة بيننا وبكت به

1. She said there was fear between us and cried because of it
For separation is sent upon the anxious one

١. قالت مخافةَ بيننا وبكتْ بهِ
فالبَيْنُ مبعوثٌ على المتخوّفِ

2. If nothing died of the fear of parting
My long anxiety over separation would kill me

٢. لو ماتَ شيءٌ من مخافةِ فُرقةٍ
لأماتَني للبين طولُ تخوفي

3. Passion filled my heart, so I struggled under its burden
Until I spoke of it without affectation

٣. ملأ الهوى قلبي فضِقتُ بحمله
حتى نطقتُ به بغيرِ تكلّفِ