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Without you, be amazed at my stance on the water

ودونك فاستغرب على الماء موقفي

1. Without you, be amazed at my stance on the water
As the son of water stood midst the pool

١. ودونَكَ فاسْتَغْرِبْ على الماءِ موْقِفي
كَما وقَفَ ابْنُ الماءِ وسْطَ غَديرِ

2. On the pedestal of joys, my structure grew firm
A sage, with what comes to him, serious and insightful

٢. على نِصْبَةِ الأفْراحِ أحْكَمَ بِنْيَتي
حَكيمٌ بِما يأتيهِ جِدُّ بَصيرِ

3. If you asked about a cup, rest, and lively companion
You needn't heed one like an expert advisor

٣. فإنْ كنْتَ عنْ كاسٍ وراحٍ وشادِنٍ
سَؤولاً فلا يُنْبيكَ مثْلُ خَبيرِ