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I wish reproach would leave you be,

ุฃุฌู„ูƒ ุฃู† ูŠู„ู… ุจูƒ ุงู„ุนุชุงุจ

1. I wish reproach would leave you be,
and doubt never taint your affection.

ูก. ุฃุฌู„ู‘ููƒูŽ ุฃูŽู†ู’ ูŠูู„ูู…ู‘ูŽ ุจููƒูŽ ุงู„ู’ุนูุชูŽุงุจู
ูˆูŽูˆูุฏู‘ูŽูƒูŽ ู„ุงูŽ ูŠูุฏูŽุงุฎูู„ูู‡ู ุงุฑู’ุชููŠูŽุงุจู

2. Spare me your long reply -
just a brief response when you can.

ูข. ูˆูŽุฃุณู’ุชูŽุนู’ุฏููŠ ุนูู„ุงูŽูƒูŽ ุนูŽู„ูŽู‰ ุงุฎู’ุชูุตูŽุงุฑู
ุฅูุฐูŽุง ู…ูŽุง ุนูŽุงุฏูŽ ู„ููŠ ู…ูู†ู’ูƒูŽ ุงู„ู’ุฌูŽูˆูŽุงุจู

3. Let there be impartial scales
to show whatโ€™s right and what is wrong.

ูฃ. ูˆูŽู„ู’ู„ุฅูู†ู’ุตูŽุงูู ู‚ูุณู’ุทูŽุงุณูŒ ู‚ูŽูˆููŠู…ูŒ
ูŠูŽุจููŠู†ู ุจูู‡ู ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ู’ุฎูŽุทูŽุฃูŽ ุงู„ุตู‘ูŽูˆูŽุงุจู

4. Will it ramble meaninglessly
like a quartet, or be concise?

ูค. ุฃูŽูŠูุทู†ูุจู ูููŠ ู…ูŽุนูŽุงู†ููŠู‡ูŽุง ุงู„ู’ู…ูŽุนูŽุงู„ููŠ
ุจูุฑูŽุจู’ุนููƒูู…ู ูˆูŽูŠูุฎู’ุชูŽุตูŽุฑู ุงู„ู’ูƒูุชูŽุงุจู

5. He who gives generously, no count,
will be counted by each word.

ูฅ. ูˆูŽู…ูŽู†ู’ ูŠูุนู’ุทูŠ ุงู„ู’ุฌูŽุฒููŠู„ูŽ ุจูู„ุงูŽ ุญูุณูŽุงุจู
ูŠูŽูƒููˆู†ู ู„ูŽู‡ู ุนูŽู„ูŽู‰ ู„ูŽูู’ุธู ุญูุณูŽุงุจู