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Rise, my boy, and bring it to me

ู‚ู… ูŠุง ุบู„ุงู… ูู‡ุงุชู‡ุง

1. Rise, my boy, and bring it to me
Red, for the apple is red

ูก. ู‚ู… ูŠุง ุบู„ุงู…ู ูู‡ุงุชู‡ุง
ุญู…ุฑุงุกูŽ ูุงู„ุชูุงุญู ุฃุญู…ุฑ

2. As red as your cheek amidst the meadows
As smooth as your sculpted brow

ูข. ู‚ุงู†ู ูƒุฎุฏู‘ูƒูŽ ุจูŠู† ุฑูŠูŽ
ุญุงู†ู ูƒุนุงุฑุถููƒูŽ ุงู„ู…ุณุทู‘ูŽุฑ

3. As though it were, with its blend, a bud
Crowning its head with a bejeweled wreath

ูฃ. ููƒุฃู†ู‘ู‡ุง ูˆุงู„ู…ุฒุฌู ูŠูู„ุจ
ุจุณู ุฑุฃุณูŽู‡ุง ุฅูƒู„ูŠู„ูŽ ุฌูˆู‡ุฑ

4. The full moon of nightfall molded it
The spheres formed the absolving starโ€™s gem

ูค. ุจูŽุฏุฑู ุงู„ุฏู‘ูุฌู‰ ุตุงุบุช ู„ู‡ ุงู„
ุฃูู„ุงูƒู ู†ุฌู…ูŽ ุงู„ุฌูˆู‘ู ู…ูุบููŽุฑ

5. As though the palm of its turner
Were, from my red wine's hue, saffronized

ูฅ. ูˆูƒุฃู†ู‘ูŽ ูƒูู‘ูŽ ู…ูุฏูŠุฑูู‡ุง
ู…ู† ู„ูˆู†ููŠ ุงู„ู‚ุงู†ูŠ ู…ูุนุตูŽูุฑูŽ