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I have attempted to translate the Arabic poem into English while preserving poetic structure. Here is the translation:

بقيت في كل يوم كم أروح وكم

1. I have attempted to translate the Arabic poem into English while preserving poetic structure. Here is the translation:
I remain each day, how much do I go and how much

١. بَقِيتُ في كلِّ يَومٍ كَمْ أروحُ وَكَمْ
أَغدُو وَملَّ المُكارِي كَمْ يُرَدّني

2. Do I come and go, and how the boats defy me
I cannot help meeting you

٢. وَلا أُزاد على التَّقارِ عندَكُمُ
كأَنّني جِئْتُكُمْ رَأْساً بِلا بَدَنِ