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Her forehead furrowed by the waterโ€™s flow

ุดุฌุช ุฌุจูŠู† ู…ุฏุงู…ู‡ุง ุจุงู„ู…ุงุก

1. Her forehead furrowed by the waterโ€™s flow,
Her cheeks blood-red where ruddy droplets go.

ูก. ุดูŽุฌู‘ูŽุชู’ ุฌูŽุจููŠู†ูŽ ู…ูุฏุงู…ูู‡ุง ุจุงู„ู…ุงุกู
ููŽุจูŽู†ุงู†ูู‡ุง ู…ูู†ู‡ุง ุฎูŽุถููŠุจู ุฏูู…ุงุกู

2. Half-dazed she sways, teeth gently clenchedโ€”but then
Her palm, untouched, is virgin among men.

ูข. ูˆูŽุฌูŽู„ูŽุชู’ ู…ูุฎุฏู‘ูŽุฑูŽุฉูŽ ุงู„ุฏูู‘ู†ุงู†ู ููŽุฏูŽู†ู‘ูู‡ุง
ู…ูู† ูƒูŽูู‘ู‘ู‡ุง ุนูŽุฐู’ุฑุงุกู ู…ูู† ุนูŽุฐู’ุฑุงุกู

3. Her torch-flame cuts the gloom and travels on;
The beetle wins a necklace made of dawn.

ูฃ. ู‡ูŽุฒูŽู…ูŽุชู’ ุฃูุดุนู‘ุชูู‡ุง ุงู„ุฏู‘ูุฌูŽู‰ ููŽู…ุถูŽู‰ ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏู’
ุบูŽู†ูู…ูŽ ุงู„ุญูŽุจุงุจู ู‚ูู„ุงุฏุฉูŽ ุงู„ุฌูŽูˆู’ุฒุงุกู

4. She circles those who watch her, and they find
A fire lit by water in their mind.

ูค. ูˆูŽุฌูŽู†ูŽุชู’ ุนู„ู‰ ูˆูŽุฌูŽู†ุงุชู ู…ูŽู†ู’ ุทุงููŽุชู’ ุจูู‡ุง
ููŽุฑูŽุฃูŽูŠู’ุชู ู†ุงุฑุงู‹ ุฃูุถุฑูู…ูŽุชู’ ููŠ ู…ุงุกู

5. The red that makes the eyewitness head spinโ€”so
The red is very like the houri!

ูฅ. ุญูŽู…ู’ุฑุงุกู ุชูุณู’ูƒูุฑู ู…ูู† ุฌููููˆู†ู ู…ูุฏููŠุฑู‡ุง
ู…ุง ุฃุดู’ุจู‡ูŽ ุงู„ุญูŽู…ู’ุฑุงุกูŽ ุจุงู„ุญูŽูˆู’ุฑุงุกู