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I met Antara as I wandered with a stricken heart,

ولقيت عنتر إذ منيت بفاصد

1. I met Antara as I wandered with a stricken heart,
Like a withered flower, dropped from its stem.

١. وَلَقِيتُ عَنْتَرَ إذْ مُنِيتُ بِفاصِدٍ
ذِي رِيشَةٍ سَقَطَتْ عليَّ كَيذْبُلِ

2. Had he but followed the path of reason, he'd not be satisfied
With aught but death, for no lesser fate would do.

٢. وَلَوْ اهتَدَى لِلعِرْقِ لَمْ يَقنَعْ بهِ
إذْ كانَ لا يُرضِيهِ غَيرُ المَقْتَلِ