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I fell for one whose spit was cloves,

ุนุดู‚ุช ู…ู† ุฑูŠู‚ุชู‡ ู‚ุฑู‚ู

1. I fell for one whose spit was cloves,
Though then he had no drinking-mate.

ูก. ุนูŽุดูู‚ู’ุชู ู…ูŽู† ุฑููŠู‚ูŽุชูู‡ู ู‚ูŽุฑู’ู‚ูŽููŒ
ูˆูŽู…ุงู„ูŽู‡ู ุฅุฐู’ ุฐูŽุงูƒูŽ ู…ูู† ุดูŽุงุฑูุจู

2. A handsome pale one, tweezed of browโ€”
His brow had scriptโ€™s own flourishes.

ูข. ู‚ูŽู„ูŽู†ู’ุฏุฑูู‰ู‘ูŒ ุญูŽู„ูŽู‚ููˆุง ุญูŽุงุฌูุจุงู‹
ู„ูŽู‡ู ูƒูŽู†ููˆู†ู ุงู„ุฎูŽุทู‘ู ู…ูู† ุญุงุฌูุจู

3. A sultan of beauty, his justice grew;
He chose to remain with no eyebrow.

ูฃ. ุณูู„ูุทูŽุงู†ู ุญูุณู’ู†ู ุฒูŽุงุฏูŽ ููŠ ุนูŽุฏู’ู„ู‡ู
ูุงุฎู’ุชูŽุงุฑูŽ ุฃูŽู†ู’ ูŠูŽุจู‚ูŽู‰ ุจูู„ุง ุญูŽุงุฌูุจู