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You combined two matters, losing composure between them

جمعت أمرين ضاع الحزم بينهما

1. You combined two matters, losing composure between them
The confusion of kings and the deeds of slaves

١. جَمَعتَ أَمرَينِ ضاعَ الحَزمُ بَينَهُما
تيهَ المُلوكِ وَأَفعالَ المَماليكِ

2. You wanted gratitude without righteousness and integrity
Indeed, you have taken an untrodden path

٢. أَرَدتَ شُكراً بِلا بِرٍّ وَمَرزِئَةٍ
لَقَد سَلَكتَ طَريقاً غَيرَ مَسلوكِ

3. You thought your honor would not be hit with calamities
Yet I do not see you in a neglected state

٣. ظَنَنتَ عِرضَكَ لا يُرمى بِقارِعَةٍ
وَما أراكَ عَلى حالٍ بِمَتروكِ