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The critic chided me, O Hind, about love, a blamer

ู„ู‚ุฏ ู„ุงู…ู†ูŠ ูŠุง ู‡ู†ุฏ ููŠ ุงู„ุญุจ ู„ุงุฆู…

1. The critic chided me, O Hind, about love, a blamer
A lover, if company is counted, is a comrade

ูก. ู„ูŽู‚ูŽุฏ ู„ุงู…ูŽู†ูŠ ูŠุง ู‡ูู†ุฏู ููŠ ุงู„ุญูุจู‘ู ู„ุงุฆูู…ูŒ
ู…ูุญูุจู‘ูŒ ุฅูุฐุง ุนูุฏู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุตูุญุงุจู ุญูŽุจูŠุจู

2. Yet he's no talebearer, by passionโ€™s creed,
Nor doubtful, by affectionโ€™s law, of probity.

ูข. ููŽู…ุง ู‡ููˆูŽ ุจูุงู„ูˆุงุดูŠ ุนูŽู„ู‰ ู…ูŽุฐู‡ูŽุจู ุงู„ู‡ูŽูˆู‰
ูˆูŽู„ุง ู‡ููˆูŽ ููŠ ุดูŽุฑุนู ุงู„ูˆูุฏุงุฏู ู…ูุฑูŠุจู

3. I told him who you were, then we conversed
In wondrous talk enchanting to lovers.

ูฃ. ูˆูŽุตูŽูุชู ู„ูŽู‡ู ู…ูŽู† ุฃูŽู†ุชู ุซูู…ู‘ูŽ ุฌูŽุฑู‰ ู„ูŽู†ุง
ุญูŽุฏูŠุซูŒ ูŠูŽู‡ูู…ู‘ู ุงู„ุนุงุดูู‚ูŠู†ูŽ ุนูŽุฌูŠุจู

4. I said, โ€œHave patience.โ€ Every brother I love
Will repent tomorrow at his belovedโ€™s hand.

ูค. ูˆูŽู‚ูู„ุชู ู„ูŽู‡ ุตูŽุจุฑุงู‹ ููŽูƒูู„ู‘ู ุฃูŽุฎูŠ ู‡ูŽูˆู‰
ุนูŽู„ู‰ ูŠูŽุฏู ู…ูŽู† ูŠูŽู‡ูˆู‰ ุบูŽุฏุงู‹ ุณูŽูŠูŽุชูˆุจู