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I called Hamdan though doors were shut;

ناديت همدان والأبوان مغلقة

1. I called Hamdan though doors were shut;
He, like my years, threw the door wide.

١. نادَيتُ هَمدانَ وَالأَبَوانُ مُغلَقَةٌ
وَمِثلُ هَمدانَ سنّى فَتحَةَ البابِ

2. He entered, not overbold nor yet
A shrinking slave, like an Indian blade

٢. كَالهُندُوانِيُّ لَم تُغَلِل مَضارِبُهُ
وَجهٌ جَميلٌ وَقَلبٌ غَيرُ وَجّابِ