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Like the necklace adorning the delicate branch of the willow tree,

ุณุงู…ูŠ ุงู„ุชู„ูŠู„ ูƒุฃู† ุนู‚ุฏ ุนุฐุงุฑู‡

1. Like the necklace adorning the delicate branch of the willow tree,
At the head of the soft, pliant twig.

ูก. ุณุงู…ูŠ ุงู„ุชู‘ูŽู„ููŠู„ู ูƒุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŽ ุนูŽู‚ู’ุฏูŽ ุนูุฐุงุฑูู‡ู
ููŠ ุฑูŽุฃุณู ุบูุตู†ู ุงู„ุจุงู†ูŽุฉู ุงู„ู…ูŽูŠู‘ูŽุงุฏู

2. It is presented like a pair of precious gems, having abandoned
The pasturing of well-fed fish in his fiery heart.

ูข. ูŠูู‡ู’ุฏู‰ ุจู…ูุซู’ู„ู ุงู„ููŽุฑู’ู‚ูŽุฏูŽูŠู†ู ูˆู†ุงุจูŽ ุนูŽู†ู’
ุฑูŽุนู’ูŠู ุงู„ุณู‘ูู…ุงูƒู ุจู‚ูŽู„ุจูู‡ู ุงู„ูˆูŽู‚ู‘ุงุฏู

3. So it seems I walked the dunes and hills
With legs long and slender like a serpentโ€™s valley.

ูฃ. ููƒูŽุฃู†ู‘ูŽู…ุง ุฃูŽุทูŽุฃู ุงู„ุฃุจุงุทุญูŽ ูˆุงู„ุฑู‘ูุจู‰
ุจุนูู‚ุงุจู ุดุงู‡ูู‚ูŽุฉู ูˆุญูŽูŠู‘ูŽุฉู ูˆูŽุงุฏู

4. And it seems that because of my whip, fleeing in fright,
A fiery brand sparked by flint and steel.

ูค. ูˆูƒุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŽู‡ู ู…ู† ุชุญุชู ุณูŽูˆู’ุทููŠูŽ ุฎุงุฑุฌุงู‹
ููŠ ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽูˆุนู ุดูุนู’ู„ูŽุฉู ู‚ุงุฏุญู ุจูุฒูู†ุงุฏู