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You promised, but when I wanted its success

وعدت فلما أن أردت نجاحه

1. You promised, but when I wanted its success
I saw in place of the star something closer

١. وعدتَ فلما أن أردتُ نجاحَه
رأيتُ مكانَ النجم ن ذاكَ أقربا

2. If you were free, you would not be late with a
Modest appointment, and if you fulfilled it, you would be the polished one

٢. فلو كنتَ حراً ما مَطلتَ بموعدٍ
زهيدٍ ولو أنجزتَ كنت المهذبا