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I wrote it, when the wine was gone,

كتبت بها وقد نفذ الشراب

1. I wrote it, when the wine was gone,
And my cup gleamed mirage-like.

١. كَتَبْتُ بها وَقَدْ نَفَذَ الشّرابُ
وكأسي مِثْلَما لَمَعَ السّرابُ

2. With me was one for whom I yearned,
Veiling her beauty from me.

٢. وَعندي مَنْ كُلِفتُ بهِ غَراماً
عَلَيه عن محاسِنهِ نِقاب

3. If you comfort me a little, I'll be grateful;
If not, then anguish will water me.

٣. فإن أسعَفْتَني بقليلِ راحٍ
وإلا سوفَ يَرويني الرِّضابُ