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My flawed creed has corrupted me

أفسد سوء مذهبي

1. My flawed creed has corrupted me
Yet my creed grants my poetry elegance

١. أفسد سوء مذهبي
في الشعر حسن مذهبي

2. I bear this burden seriously
Atop a playful steed's back

٢. وحملي الجد على
ظهر حصان اللعب

3. My Master Ali was not pleased
That I insulted the Prophet's companions

٣. لم يرض مولاي علي
سبي لأصحاب النبي

4. And he chided me saying:
"You fool! Why have you not repented

٤. وقال لي ويحك يا
أحمق لم لم تتب

5. Of insulting a people, hoping for
Their grace, which will not come to pass

٥. من سب قوم من رجا
آلاءهم لم يخب

6. In your ignorance, you have cast off contentment
With that which God's fire has purified you"

٦. رمت الرضا جهلاً بما
أصلاك نار اللهب