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I sent you as a visitor, so you succeeded with a glance

بعثتك مرتادا ففزت بنظرة

1. I sent you as a visitor, so you succeeded with a glance,
And you neglected me until I suspected you.

١. بعَثتُكَ مُرتاداً ففًزتَ بِنَظرَة
وأغفلتني حتَّى أسأتُ بكَ الظَّنَّا

2. You whispered to the one you love while I was distant,
Oh, how I wish I knew what drew you near.

٢. فناجَيتَ من أهوى وكنتُ مباعداً
فيا ليت شعري عن دنوِّكَ ما أَغنى

3. You glanced back at the beauty of her face,
And took pleasure in listening to her melody up close.

٣. وردَّدتَ طرفاً في محاسن وجههَا
ومَتَّعتَ باستماع نَغمتِها أدنَا

4. I see a clear mark from her in your eye,
Your eyes have certainly gained beauty from her eyes.

٤. أرى أثراً منها بعينك بيِّناً
لقد أخذت عيناك من عَينها حُسنا

5. Oh, how I wish I was the messenger and you were me,
So you would be the one sent far away and I would be the one brought near.

٥. فيا ليتني كنتُ الرسولُ وكُنتَني
فكنتَ الذي يُقصَى وكنتُ الذي أُدنَى