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A land devoid of beauty, to the point

ุจู„ุฏ ู‚ุฏ ุฎู„ุช ู…ู† ุงู„ุญุณู† ุญุชู‰

1. A land devoid of beauty, to the point
That my heart inclines toward no beloved.

ูก. ุจูŽู„ุฏ ู‚ูŽุฏ ุฎูŽู„ูŽุช ู…ูู† ุงู„ุญูุณู† ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰
ู„ุง ุญูŽุจูŠุจ ุฅู„ูŽูŠู‡ู ู‚ูŽู„ุจูŠ ูŠูŽู…ูŠู„ู

2. And if I compose poetry, tell me thenโ€”
To whom should I direct my praise?

ูข. ูˆูŽุฅูุฐุง ู…ุง ู†ูŽุธู…ุช ุดุนุฑุงู‹ ููŽู‚ูู„ ู„ูŠ
ุฃูŽูŠ ุดูŽุฎุต ุจูู‡ู ุงู„ู…ูŽุฏูŠุญ ุฃูŽู‚ูˆู„ู

3. The winds of woe have stirred up poisonous gales,
And acceptance has turned from the gardens.

ูฃ. ุนูŽุตูุช ู„ูู„ู‡ูู…ูˆู… ุฑูŠุญ ุณูู…ูˆู…
ูˆูŽุชูŽูˆูŽู„ูŽุช ุนูŽู† ุงู„ุฑููŠุงุถ ุงู„ู‚ูุจูˆู„ู

4. No wonder if my tears again turn bloody,
For sleepโ€™s slain victim lies between my lids.

ูค. ู„ุง ุนูŽุฌูŽูŠุจ ุฅูู† ุนุงุฏูŽ ุฏูŽู…ุนูŠ ุฏูู…ุงุกู‹
ููŽู…ูŽู†ุงู…ูŠ ุจูŽูŠู†ูŽ ุงู„ุฌูููˆู† ู‚ูŽุชูŠู„ู