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In its darkness, the stars,

ูˆุฏุฌู†ุฉ ู„ู†ุฌูˆู…ู‡ุง

1. In its darkness, the stars,
like war, ignite,

ูก. ูˆูŽุฏูŽุฌู†ุฉ ู„ูู†ูุฌูˆู…ูู‡ุง
ู†ุงุฑ ุงู„ูˆูŽุบู‰ ุชูŽุชูŽูˆู‚ูŽุฏู

2. A horseman has wandered there
and shone his separation upon it.

ูข. ู‚ูŽุฏ ุฌุงู„ูŽ ููŠู‡ุง ุฑุงู…ูุญูŒ
ูˆูŽุชูŽู„ุง ุณู‡ุงู‡ุง ุงู„ูุฑู‚ุฏู

3. So it seems its lightningโ€™s brilliance
is a sword, unsheathing and sheathing.

ูฃ. ููŽูƒูŽุฃู† ู„ุงู…ุน ุจูŽุฑู‚ูู‡ุง
ุณูŽูŠูุงู‹ ูŠูŽุณู„ ูˆูŽูŠูุบู…ูŽุฏู