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I asked the one whose glances and eyebrows

سألت من لحظه وحاجبه

1. I asked the one whose glances and eyebrows
Were like arrow and bow, for a tryst

١. سأَلتُ مَن لحظُهُ وَحاجِبُه
كالسهم وَالقوس مَوعِداً حسنا

2. So he aimed his glances like arrows
And his eyebrows bent like a bow, and aligned

٢. فَفوَّقَ السَهمَ مِن لَواحِظِهِ
واِنقَوَسَ الحاجِبانِ واِقتَرَنا