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Misfortunes have kept me from visiting you

ุนุฏุชู†ูŠ ุนู† ุฒูŠุงุฑุชูƒู… ุนูˆุงุฏ

1. Misfortunes have kept me from visiting you,
The least frightful being the points of lances.

ูก. ุนูŽุฏูŽุชู†ูŠ ุนูŽู† ุฒููŠุงุฑูŽุชููƒูู… ุนูŽูˆุงุฏู
ุฃูŽู‚ูŽู„ู‘ู ู…ูŽุฎูˆููู‡ุง ุณูู…ุฑู ุงู„ุฑูู…ุงุญู

2. Yet meeting them seems easy to me
If reaching you means success.

ูข. ูˆูŽุฅูู†ู‘ูŽ ู„ูู‚ุงุฆูŽู‡ุง ู„ูŽูŠูŽู‡ูˆู†ู ุนูู†ุฏูŠ
ุฅูุฐุง ูƒุงู†ูŽ ุงู„ูˆูุตูˆู„ู ุฅูู„ู‰ ู†ูŽุฌุงุญู

3. But between us there is estrangement and separationโ€”
Can I hope after that for reconciliation?

ูฃ. ูˆูŽู„ูŽูƒูู† ุจูŽูŠู†ูŽู†ุง ุจูŽูŠู†ูŒ ูˆูŽู‡ูŽุฌุฑูŒ
ุฃูŽุฃูŽุฑุฌูˆ ุจูŽุนุฏูŽ ุฐูŽู„ููƒูŽ ู…ูู† ุตูŽู„ุงุญู

4. I would stay put, even if my yearning
Were to ride the necks of the winds to you.

ูค. ุฃูŽู‚ูŽู…ุชู ูˆูŽู„ูŽูˆ ุฑูŽุทูŽุนุชู ุฑูŽุณูŠุณูŽ ุดูŽูˆู‚ูŠ
ุฑูŽูƒูุจุชู ุฅูู„ูŽูŠูƒูŽ ุฃูŽุนู†ุงู‚ูŽ ุงู„ุฑููŠุงุญูŠ