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My heart is captive within my ribs

ู‚ู„ุจูŠ ุฑู‡ูŠู† ุจูŠู† ุฃุถู„ุงุนูŠ

1. My heart is captive within my ribs
Among hopes and desires

ูก. ู‚ูŽู„ุจูŠ ุฑูŽู‡ูŠู†ูŒ ุจูŠู†ูŽ ุฃูŽุถู„ุงุนูŠ
ู…ูู† ุจูŠู†ู ุฅูŠู†ุงุณู ูˆุฅูุทู’ู…ุงุนู

2. It answered the caller of passion โ€œHere I amโ€
From wherever it calls

ูข. ู…ูู† ุญูŽูŠู’ุซู ู…ุง ูŠูŽุฏุนูˆู‡ู ุฏุงุนูŠ ุงู„ู‡ูˆู‰
ุฃุฌุงุจูŽู‡ู ู„ูŽุจู‘ูŽูŠู’ูƒูŽ ู…ูู† ุฏุงุนู

3. Who can help a hopeless sick man
Or a dead man with no mourner

ูฃ. ู…ูŽู† ู„ุณูŽู‚ูŠู…ู ู…ุง ู„ู‡ู ุนุงุฆุฏูŒ
ูˆู…ูŠู‘ูุชู ู„ูŠุณ ู„ู‡ ู†ุงุนูŠ

4. When my critic saw what she saw
And my hearing took it all in

ูค. ู„ู…ู‘ูŽุง ุฑุฃูŽุชู’ ุนุงุฐูู„ูŽุชูŠ ู…ุง ุฑุฃูŽุชู’
ูˆูƒุงู†ูŽ ู„ูŠ ู…ูู† ุณูŽู…ู’ุนูู‡ุง ูˆุงุนูŠ

5. She said, without intending insult
โ€œEnough! You have overdone it, my hearing can take no more."

ูฅ. ู‚ุงู„ุช ูˆู„ู… ุชู‚ุตูุฏู’ ู„ูู‚ููŠู„ู ุงู„ุฎู†ู‰
ู…ูŽู‡ู’ู„ุงู‹ ู„ู‚ุฏ ุฃูŽุจู„ุบู’ุชูŽ ุฃูŽุณู’ู…ุงุนูŠ