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You granted me affection when it was a child, but it has now grown

ู…ู†ุญุชูƒ ูˆุฏุง ูƒุงู† ุทูู„ุง ูู‚ุฏ ู†ุดุง

1. You granted me affection when it was a child, but it has now grown
And you have shown me a body of affection that is desolate

ูก. ู…ูŽู†ูŽุญุชููƒูŽ ูˆูุฏู‘ุงู‹ ูƒุงู†ูŽ ุทููู„ุงู‹ ููŽู‚ูŽุฏ ู†ูŽุดุง
ูˆูŽุฃูŽุจุฏูŽูŠุชูŽ ู„ูŠ ุฌูุณู…ุงู‹ ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ูˆูุฏู‘ู ู…ูˆุญูุดุง

2. I see the fruit of beauty that I had planted
On the roof of branches full of fruits

ูข. ุฃูŽุฑู‰ ุซูŽู…ูŽุฑูŽ ุงู„ุญูุณู†ู ุงู„ู‘ูŽุฐูŠ ู‚ูŽุฏ ุบูŽุฑูŽุณุชูู‡ู
ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุณูŽู‚ูู ุฃูŽุนูˆุงุฏู ุงู„ุชูŽุฌูŽู†ู‘ูŠ ู…ูุนูŽุฑู‘ูุดุง

3. And I have in my chest, my friend, from the agony of passion
A burning I know not whether it is embers or burning

ูฃ. ูˆูŽู„ูŠ ูŠุง ุฎูŽู„ููŠู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุตูŽุฏุฑู ู…ูู† ู„ูŽูˆุนูŽุฉู ุงู„ู‡ูŽูˆู‰
ุญูŽุดุงู‹ ู„ูŽุณุชู ุฃูŽุฏุฑูŠ ุฌูŽู…ุฑูŽุฉูŒ ู‡ููŠูŽ ุฃูŽู… ุญูŽุดุง

4. So cure an illness from it spreading in the body
As beauty has spread on the plains of your face

ูค. ููŽุฏุงูˆู ุณูŽู‚ุงู…ุงู‹ ู…ูู†ู‡ู ููŠ ุงู„ุฌูุณู…ู ูุงุดููŠุงู‹
ูƒูŽู…ุง ุงู„ุญูุณู†ู ููŠ ุณุงุญุงุชู ูˆูŽุฌู‡ููƒูŽ ู‚ูŽุฏ ููŽุดุง

5. And I swear if you appeared to a keen observerโ€™s eye
You would truly dazzle names that are dazzling

ูฅ. ููŽุฃูู‚ุณูู…ู ู„ูŽูˆ ุชูŽุจุฏูˆ ู„ูุนูŽูŠู†ู ู…ูุฑูŽู‚ู‘ูุดู
ู„ูŽุฃูŽุฐู‡ูŽู„ุชูŽ ุนูŽู† ุฃูŽุณู…ุงุกูŽ ุญูŽู‚ู‘ุงู‹ ู…ูุฑูŽู‚ู‘ูุดุง