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I am in intense grief and great sorrow

أنا في لوعة وحزن شديد

1. I am in intense grief and great sorrow
I have no more capacity for grief

١. أَنا في لَوعَةٍ وَحُزنٍ شَديدِ
لَيسَ عِندي لِلَوعَةٍ مِن مَزيدِ

2. By my father I took a breath of air
From his soft breath on Thursday, the wind of affection

٢. بِأَبي شادِنٌ تَنَسَّمتُ مِن عَي
نَيهِ يَومَ الخَميسِ ريحَ الصُدودِ

3. My sin became like Adam's sin, oh 'Amr
So I was expelled from the gardens of eternity

٣. صارَ ذَنبي كَذَنبِ آدَمَ يا عَم
رُو فَأُخرِجتُ مِن جِنانِ الخُلودِ

4. I would ransom the slumber of eyelids, named
And surnamed with some of Abd al-Hamid

٤. أَنا أَفدي ساجي الجُفونِ يُسَمّى
وَيُكَنّى بِبَعضِ عَبدِ الحَميدِ