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I have seen naught of separation, when

ู„ู… ุฃุฑ ุดูŠุฆุง ู…ู† ุงู„ูุฑุงู‚ ุฅุฐุง

1. I have seen naught of separation, when
The brother of parting is an ardent lover,

ูก. ู„ูŽู… ุฃูŽุฑูŽ ุดูŽูŠุฆุงู‹ ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ููุฑุงู‚ู ุฅูุฐุง
ูƒุงู†ูŽ ุฃูŽุฎูˆ ุงู„ุจูŽูŠู†ู ุนุงุดูู‚ุงู‹ ูƒูŽู„ููุง

2. More difficult than the stance of one bidding farewell,
Who desires to take leave and turn away.

ูข. ุฃูŽุตุนูŽุจูŽ ู…ูู† ูˆูŽู‚ููŽุฉู ุงู„ู…ูุดูŽูŠู‘ูุนู ู„ูู„ุญูุจู‘ู
ูŠูุฑูŠุฏู ุงู„ูˆูŽุฏุงุนูŽ ู…ูู†ุตูŽุฑููุง

3. What use is nearness to the lover if
His beloved spurns him and shows disdain?

ูฃ. ู…ุง ุฃูŽู†ููŽุนูŽ ุงู„ู‚ูุฑุจูŽ ู„ูู„ู…ูุญูุจู‘ู ูˆูŽุฅูู†
ุฃูŽุนุฑูŽุถูŽ ุนูŽู†ู‡ู ุญูŽุจูŠุจูู‡ู ูˆูŽุฌูŽูุง

4. What lover has perfect bliss, if he
Does not receive some glance of passionโ€™s pain?

ูค. ุฃูŽูŠู‘ู ู…ูุญูุจู‘ู ุชูŽู…ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุณูุฑูˆุฑู ู„ูŽู‡ู
ู„ูŽู… ูŠูŽู„ู‚ูŽ ู…ูู† ู„ูŽูˆุนูŽุฉู ุงู„ู‡ูŽูˆู‰ ุทูุฑูŽูุง