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My twig did not find guidance, but rather

عصاني فما لاقى الرشاد وإنما

1. My twig did not find guidance, but rather
The consequences of the misguided became apparent.

١. عَصاني فَما لاقَى الرَشادَ وَإِنَّما
تَبَيَّنَ مِن أَمرِ الغَوِيِّ عَواقِبُه

2. So it ended up carried on the back of a camel,
Its innards oozing out from the jostling.

٢. فَأَصبَحَ مَحمولاً عَلى ظَهرِ أَلَّةٍ
يَمُجُّ نَجِيعَ الجَوفِ مِنهُ تَرائِبُه

3. Unless you ride high above it,
How will you avoid the back of what you ride?

٣. فَإِلاّ تَجلَّلَها يُعالوكَ فَوقَها
وَكيفَ تَوَقَّى ظَهرَ ما أَنتَ راكِبُه