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After asking much, a beloved promised gifts to me

نوى لي بعد إكثار السؤال

1. After asking much, a beloved promised gifts to me,
But when I sought to claim that vow’s validity

١. نَوَى لِي بَعدَ إِكثارِ السُؤالِ
حَبيبٌ أَن يُسامِحَ بِالنَوالِ

2. He cruelly refused to keep his sworn promise.
And his closeness was the cure to my malady!

٢. فَلَما رمتُ إِنجازَاً لِوَعدي
عَلَيهِ أَبى الوَفاءَ بِما نَوَى لي

3. Yet misfortunes have revoked those vows once made me.

٣. وَكانَ القُربُ مِنهُ شِفاءَ نَفسي
فَقَد قَضَتِ النَوائِبُ بِالنَوى لي