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A rose I compared his rosy cheek to,

وريم على السكر جمشته

1. A rose I compared his rosy cheek to,
With a slice by its cheek made an effect.

١. وَريمٍ عَلى السُكرِ جمّشتُه
بِقُرصٍ بِعارِضِهِ أَثّرا

2. So his narcissus did turn into a rose
And the rose of his cheeks did turn to a water-lily.

٢. فَأَصبحَ نَرجِسُهُ وَردَةً
وَوَردَةُ خَدَّيهِ نِيلوفرا