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Eloquence is not prolonged speech

ู„ูŠุณ ุงู„ุจู„ุงุบุฉ ู…ุนู†ู‰

1. Eloquence is not prolonged speech
Wherein excess words have place,

ูก. ู„ูŽูŠุณูŽ ุงู„ุจูŽู„ุงุบูŽุฉู ู…ูŽุนู†ู‰ู‹
ููŠู‡ู ุงู„ูƒูŽู„ุงู…ู ูŠูŽุทูˆู„ู

2. But to pack myriad thoughts
In a few words choice and chaste.

ูข. ุจูŽู„ ุตูŽูˆุบู ู…ูŽุนู†ู‰ู‹ ูƒูŽุซูŠุฑู
ูŠูŽุญูˆูŠู‡ู ู„ูŽูุธูŒ ู‚ูŽู„ูŠู„ู

3. Better by far the briefest phrase
That surplus wording lays to waste

ูฃ. ููŽุงู„ููŽุถู„ู ููŠ ุญูุณู†ู ู„ูŽูุธู
ูŠูŽู‚ูู„ู‘ู ููŠู‡ู ุงู„ููุถูˆู„ู

4. Than devious wording that obscures
The meaning to the readerโ€™s taste.

ูค. ูŠูŽุธูู†ู‘ูŽู‡ู ุงู„ู†ุงุณู ุณูŽู‡ู„ุงู‹
ูˆูŽู…ุง ุฅูู„ูŽูŠู‡ู ุณูŽุจูŠู„ู

5. For the best sense is often that
Which utters least in paraphrase.

ูฅ. ูˆูŽุงู„ุนูŽูŠู‘ู ู…ูŽุนู†ู‰ู‹ ู‚ูŽุตูŠุฑูŒ
ูŠูŽุญูˆูŠู‡ู ู„ูŽูุธูŒ ุทูŽูˆูŠู„ู