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I wrote, but knew not if a tracing fair

ูƒุชุจุช ูู…ุง ุนู„ู…ุช ุฃุฎุท ู†ู‚ุด

1. I wrote, but knew not if a tracing fair
Or happiness within myself was there

ูก. ูƒูŽุชูŽุจุชู ููŽู…ุง ุนูŽู„ูู…ุชู ุฃูŽุฎูŽุทู‘ู ู†ูŽู‚ุดู
ูŠูŽู„ูˆุญู ู„ูู†ุงุธูุฑูŠ ุฃูŽู… ุญูŽุธู‘ู ู†ูŽูุณูŠ

2. By it made blissful was my day of life
And well-nigh joy returned to yesterday

ูข. ููŽุชูŽู…ู‘ูŽ ุจูู‡ู ุนูŽู„ูŠู‘ูŽ ุณูุฑูˆุฑู ูŠูŽูˆู…ูŠ
ูˆูŽูƒุงุฏูŽ ุจูุฃูŽู† ูŠูุนูŠุฏูŽ ุณูุฑูˆุฑูŽ ุฃูŽู…ุณูŠ

3. They said, โ€œIn it thouโ€™st found a blissful thingโ€
I answered in unveiling free from doubt

ูฃ. ูˆูŽู‚ุงู„ูˆุง ู‚ูŽุฏ ูˆูŽุฌูŽุฏุชูŽ ุจูู‡ู ุณูุฑูˆุฑุงู‹
ููŽู‚ูู„ุชู ู…ูุตูŽุฑู‘ูุญุงู‹ ู…ูู† ุบูŽูŠุฑู ู„ูŽุจุณู

4. โ€œWithin the senderโ€™s breast loveโ€™s seed I setโ€
Not I the fruit have plucked of what Iโ€™ve sown

ูค. ุบูŽุฑูŽุณุชู ุจูุตูŽุฏุฑู ู…ูุฑุณูู„ูู‡ู ูˆูุฏุงุฏุงู‹
ููŽู…ุง ุฃูŽู†ุง ู‚ูŽุฏ ุฌูŽู†ูŽูŠุชู ุซูู…ุงุฑูŽ ุบูŽุฑุณูŠ