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I strive to unsheathe my sword of praise

ุฃุฌุฑุฏ ูƒูŠ ุฃุฌุฑุฏ ุณูŠู ู…ุฏุญูŠ

1. I strive to unsheathe my sword of praise
That my tongue may speak of none but you

ูก. ุฃูุฌูŽุฑู‘ูŽุฏู ูƒูŽูŠ ุฃูุฌูŽุฑู‘ูŽุฏูŽ ุณูŽูŠููŽ ู…ูŽุฏุญูŠ
ููŽูŠูŽู†ุจูˆ ุนูŽู† ุณููˆุงูƒูŽ ุจูู‡ู ู„ูุณุงู†ูŠ

2. And versify othersโ€™ glory though verse
Pricks my fingertips like thorns do

ูข. ูˆูŽุฃูŽู†ุธูู…ู ู…ูŽุฏุญูŽ ุบูŽูŠุฑููƒูŽ ูˆูŽุงู„ู‚ูŽูˆุงููŠ
ุชูŽุนูŽุถู‘ู ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู‘ูŽ ุฃูŽุทุฑุงููŽ ุงู„ุจูŽู†ุงู†ู

3. So I feign bewilderment in my excuse
And hide what agonizes my soul

ูฃ. ููŽุฃูุธู‡ูุฑู ุญูŽูŠุฑูŽุฉู‹ ููŠ ุจูŽุณุทู ุนูุฐุฑูŠ
ูˆูŽุฃูุฎููŠ ู…ุง ูŠูุฌูู†ู‘ู ู„ูŽูƒูู…ู ุฌูŽู†ุงู†ูŠ

4. If I do, glory is pained, if I donโ€™t
Meaning itself feels my heart grow cold

ูค. ููŽุฅูู† ุฃูŽูุนูŽู„ ุชูŽุฃูŽู„ู‘ูŽู…ูŽุชู ุงู„ู…ูŽุนุงู„ูŠ
ูˆูŽุฅูู† ุฃูŽู†ูƒูู„ ุชูŽุธูŽู„ู‘ูŽู…ูŽุชู ุงู„ู…ูŽุนุงู†ูŠ