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I left wines to their owners

ุชุฑูƒุช ุงู„ุฎู…ูˆุฑ ู„ุฃุฑุจุงุจู‡ุง

1. I left wines to their owners
And came to drink fresh water

ูก. ุชูŽุฑูŽูƒุชู ุงู„ุฎูู…ูˆุฑูŽ ู„ุฃูŽุฑุจุงุจูู‡ุง
ูˆูŽุงู‚ุจู„ุชู ุฃูŽุดุฑูŽุจู ู…ุงุกู‹ ู‚ูุฑุงุญุง

2. I was once enamored with them
Like a boy's love for a flirtatious girl

ูข. ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏ ูƒูู†ุชู ุญูŠู†ุงู‹ ุจูู‡ุง ู…ูุบุฑูŽู…ุงู‹
ูƒุญุจู‘ ุงู„ุบู„ุงู…ู ุงู„ููŽุชุงุฉูŽ ุงู„ุฑูŽุฏุงุญุง

3. Nothing of that love remains in my chest
Except sometimes I sigh when it is mentioned

ูฃ. ููŽู„ูŽู… ูŠูŽุจู‚ูŽ ููŠ ุงู„ุตูŽุฏุฑู ู…ูู† ุญุจู‘ู‡ุง
ุณููˆู‰ ุฃูŽู† ุฅูุฐุง ุฐููƒูุฑุช ู‚ูู„ุชู ุขุญุง

4. It wasn't fear of scandal from my friend
That made me leave it

ูค. ูˆูŽู…ุง ูƒุงู†ูŽ ุชูŽุฑูƒูŠ ู„ูŽู‡ุง ุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŽู†ูŠ
ูŠูŽุฎุงูู ู†ูŽุฏูŠู…ูŠ ุนูŽู„ูŠู‘ูŽ ุงููุชูุถุงุญุง

5. Rather I say to it โ€œHello!โ€
โ€œWelcome!โ€ along with ease and a good morning

ูฅ. ูˆูŽู„ูŽูƒูู†ู‘ูŽ ู‚ูŽูˆู„ูŠ ู„ูŽู‡ู ู…ูŽุฑุญูŽุจุงู‹
ูˆูŽุฃูŽู‡ู„ุงู‹ ู…ูŽุน ุงู„ุณูŽู‡ู„ู ูˆุงูู†ุนูู… ุตูŽุจุงุญุง