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My world, in you lies the passion of my soul and its demise

ุฏู†ูŠุงูŠ ููŠูƒ ู‡ูˆู‰ ู†ูุณูŠ ูˆู…ู‡ู„ูƒู‡ุง

1. My world, in you lies the passion of my soul and its demise
And water leads to the death of the intent drinker

ูก. ุฏูู†ูŠุงูŠูŽ ููŠูƒูŽ ู‡ูŽูˆู‰ ู†ูŽูุณูŠ ูˆูŽู…ู‡ู„ููƒูู‡ุง
ูˆูŽุงู„ู…ุงุกู ูŠูˆุฏูŠ ุจูู†ูŽูุณู ุงู„ูˆุงุฑูุฏู ุงู„ุตุงุฏูŠ

2. I did not choose you, so do not blame me
In you are temptations, if I try to avoid them

ูข. ูˆูŽู…ุง ู‚ูŽุตูŽุฏุชููƒู ู…ูุฎุชุงุฑุงู‹ ููŽุชูŽุนุฐูู„ูŽู†ูŠ
ููŠูƒู ุงู„ุนูŽูˆุงุฐูู„ู ุฅูู† ุญุงูˆูŽู„ุชู ุฅูู‚ุตุงุฏูŠ

3. A man seeks something unclear
Like a letter uttered between a 'z' and an 's'

ูฃ. ูˆูŽุงู„ู…ูŽุฑุกู ูŠูŽุทู„ูุจู ุฃูŽู…ุฑุงู‹ ู…ุง ูŠูุจูŽูŠู‘ูู†ูู‡ู
ูƒูŽุงู„ุญูŽุฑูู ูŠูู„ููŽุธู ุจูŽูŠู†ูŽ ุงู„ุฒุงูŠ ูˆูŽุงู„ุตุงุฏู

4. One death is from a firm rope which killed its dead
Another exceeded a ropeโ€™s allotted time through destinyโ€™s deception

ูค. ู…ูŽูˆุชุงู†ู ู‡ูŽุฐุง ุจููˆูŽุฑุณู ุนูู„ู‘ูŽ ู…ูŽูŠู‘ูุชูู‡ู
ูˆูŽุขุฎูŽุฑูŽ ุฒุงุฏูŽ ุนูŽู† ูˆูŽุฑุณู ุจูููุฑุตุงุฏู