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I took to counting my days

أخذت أعد أيامي

1. I took to counting my days
And looking for news of you eagerly

١. أخذت أعد أيامي
وأنظر جاهداً خبرك

2. And asking my days about you
So by estrangement who has commanded you

٢. وأسأل عنك أيامي
فمن بالهجر قد أمرك

3. Years I spent in love
Until love becomes exhausted

٣. سنون قضيتها حبّا
إلى أن يتعب الحب

4. If passion is a sin
Then my beloved is that sin

٤. فإن يكن الهوى ذنبا
فمحبوبي هو الذنب

5. A beauty I will not name
For passion has confused me about him

٥. مليح لا أسميه
فقد حار الهوى فيه

6. I drank wine from his mouth
So I lost my way in craving him

٦. شربت الخمر من فيه
فصرت أتيه في التيه

7. And stay up through his nights
A beauty his face like the moon

٧. وأسهر في لياليه
مليح وجهه البدر

8. And in his glances is magic
And in his tenderness is the command

٨. وفي ألحاظه سحر
وفي أعطافه الأمر

9. That I passionately love him

٩. بأن أهوى له الأمر