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A sour apple bit me

ุชูุงุญุฉ ุญุงู…ุถุฉ ุนุถู‡ุง

1. A sour apple bit me
In an orchard picked by one with scowling face

ูก. ุชููู‘ุงุญูŽุฉูŒ ุญุงู…ูุถูŽุฉูŒ ุนูŽุถูŽู‘ู‡ุง
ููŠ ุซูŽู…ูŽู„ู ู…ูŽู† ู‚ูŽุทูŽู‘ุจูŽ ุงู„ูˆูŽุฌู‡ุง

2. Yet neโ€™er before had I found graceless
He who is paid bite and grimace

ูข. ูˆูŽู„ูŽู… ุฃูŽุฎูŽู„ ู…ูู† ู‚ูŽุจู„ูู‡ุง ู…ูุญุณูู†ุงู‹
ูŠูุฌุฒู‰ ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู‡ู ุงู„ุนูŽุถูŽู‘ ูˆูŽุงู„ู†ูŽุฌู‡ุง