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And from the torn edges of his shirt it seems

ومنشق أعطاف القميص كأنه

1. And from the torn edges of his shirt it seems
When darkness falls a fire has been lit

١. وَمُنشَقِّ أَعطافِ القَميصِ كَأَنَّهُ
إِذا لاحَتِ الظَلماءُ نارٌ تَوَقَّدُ

2. A youth who gains his food only as one excused
Like the highest point of a spear, no, he is more glorious

٢. فَتىً لا يَنالُ الزادَ إِلّا مُعَذِّراً
كَأَعلى سِنانِ الرُمحِ بَل هُوَ أَنجَدُ