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My poetry spread in Sulayma and appeared

ุดุงุน ุดุนุฑูŠ ููŠ ุณู„ูŠู…ู‰ ูˆุธู‡ุฑ

1. My poetry spread in Sulayma and appeared
Seen by every wind and settlement

ูก. ุดุงุนูŽ ุดูุนุฑูŠ ููŠ ุณูู„ูŽูŠู…ู‰ ูˆูŽุธูŽู‡ูŽุฑ
ูˆูŽุฑุงู‡ู ูƒูู„ู‘ู ุจุงุฏู ูˆูŽุญูŽุถูŽุฑ

2. The young women passed it between them
And sang it until it spread

ูข. ูˆูŽุชูŽู‡ุงุฏูŽุชู‡ู ุงู„ุนูŽุฐุงุฑู‰ ุจูŽูŠู†ูŽู‡ุง
ูˆูŽุชูŽุบูŽู†ู‘ูŽูŠู†ูŽ ุจูู‡ู ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุงูู†ุชูŽุดูŽุฑ

3. I said words about Sulayma in admiration
Like what Jamฤซl and โ€˜Umar said

ูฃ. ู‚ูู„ุชู ู‚ูŽูˆู„ุงู‹ ู„ูุณูู„ูŽูŠู…ู‰ ู…ูุนุฌูุจุงู‹
ู…ูุซู„ูŽ ู…ุง ู‚ุงู„ูŽ ุฌูŽู…ูŠู„ูŒ ูˆูŽุนูู…ูŽุฑ

4. If we saw traces of Sulayma
We would bow down thousands of times to the traces

ูค. ู„ูŽูˆ ุฑูŽุฃูŽูŠู†ุง ู„ูุณูู„ูŽูŠู…ู‰ ุฃูŽุซูŽุฑุงู‹
ู„ูŽุณูŽุฌูŽุฏู†ุง ุฃูŽู„ููŽ ุฃูŽู„ูู ู„ูู„ุฃูŽุซูŽุฑ

5. And we would take her as a chosen imam
She would be our pilgrimage and place of worship

ูฅ. ูˆูŽุงูุชู‘ูŽุฎูŽุฐู†ุงู‡ุง ุฅูู…ุงู…ุงู‹ ู…ูุฑุชูŽุถู‰ู‹
ูˆูŽู„ูŽูƒุงู†ูŽุช ุญูŽุฌู‘ูŽู†ุง ูˆูŽุงู„ู…ูุนุชูŽู…ูŽุฑ

6. She is but the daughter of Saสฟฤซd, a moon
Is it shameful if we bowed to the moon?

ูฆ. ุฅูู†ู‘ูŽู…ุง ุจูู†ุชู ุณูŽุนูŠุฏู ู‚ูŽู…ูŽุฑูŒ
ู‡ูŽู„ ุญูŽุฑูุฌู†ุง ุฅูู† ุณูŽุฌูŽุฏู†ุง ู„ูู„ู‚ูŽู…ูŽุฑ