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When I wanted to visit the young woman

ูˆู„ู…ุง ุฃุฑุฏุช ุทุฑูˆู‚ ุงู„ูุชุงุฉ

1. When I wanted to visit the young woman
And a friend who does not get jealous accompanied me

ูก. ูˆู„ู…ู‘ุง ุฃูŽุฑุฏุช ุทุฑูˆู‚ูŽ ุงู„ูุชุงุฉู
ูˆุตุงุญุจู†ูŠ ุตุงุญุจูŒ ู„ุง ูŠุบุงุฑู

2. My tongue fell silent, beyond hearing
So I kept my secret and spoke openly

ูข. ุตู…ูˆุชู ุงู„ู„ุณุงู† ุจุนูŠุฏ ุงู„ุณู‘ู…ุงุนู
ูุณุฑู‘ููŠูŽ ู…ููƒุชูŽุชูŽู…ูŒ ูˆุงู„ุฌู‡ุงุฑู

3. The embrace grew tight, so her cloak
Became her dress while my dress was my turban

ูฃ. ูˆูŽุถุงู‚ ุงู„ุนู†ุงู‚ู ูุตุงุฑ ุงู„ุฑู‘ุฏุงุก
ู„ู‡ุง ู…ู„ุจุณุงู‹ ูˆู„ุจุงุณูŠ ุงู„ุฎู…ุงุฑู

4. And we didn't wrap around each other
Like tree branches entwining, except for our loincloths

ูค. ูˆูŽู…ุง ู„ูู‘ู†ุง ูƒุงูู„ุชูุงูู ุงู„ุบุตูˆู†ู
ุฌูŽู…ูŠุนุงู‹ ู‡ู†ุงู„ูƒ ุฅู„ู‘ุง ุงู„ุฅุฒุงุฑู

5. Conversation was sweet after long separation
And that nearness

ูฅ. ูˆุทุงุจ ู„ู†ุง ุจุนุฏ ุทูˆู„ู ุงู„ุจุนุงุฏู
ุฑููˆุงุก ุงู„ุญุฏูŠุซ ูˆุฐุงูƒ ุงู„ุฌููˆุงุฑู

6. I drank the sparkle of her eyes intoxicated
But itโ€™s an intoxication without aftereffects

ูฆ. ุดูŽุฑุจุชู ุจุฑูŠู‚ูŽุชู‡ุง ุฎูŽู…ุฑุฉู‹
ูˆู„ูƒู†ู‘ู‡ุง ุฎู…ุฑุฉูŒ ู„ุง ุชูุฏุงุฑู

7. As if the darkness with the radiance of her face
Obtained from it and gave to it daylight

ูง. ูƒุฃู†ู‘ ุงู„ุธู‘ู„ุงู…ูŽ ุจุฅุดุฑุงู‚ ู…ุง
ุฃู†ุงู„ูŽุชู’ ูˆุฃุนุทุชู‡ ู…ู†ู‡ุง ู†ู‡ุงุฑู

8. And my arm left a trace on her cheek
And her bracelet left a trace on my side

ูจ. ูˆูŽุฃูŽุซู‘ุฑ ููŠ ุฌูŠุฏูู‡ุง ุณุงุนุฏูŠ
ูˆุฃุซู‘ุฑ ููŠ ุฌุงู†ุจูŠู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุณู‘ููˆุงุฑู

9. If a cup was poured between us
Neither of our hands would retain any sediment

ูฉ. ููŽู„ูˆ ุตูุจู‘ูŽุชู ุงู„ูƒุฃุณ ู…ุง ุจูŽูŠู†ู†ุง
ู„ู…ุง ุฎุฑุฌุช ู…ู† ูŠุฏูŠู†ุง ุงู„ุนูู‚ุงุฑู

10. The long nights have passed fleetingly
While these short nights drag on

ูกู . ูˆู†ุงุจ ู…ู†ุงุจูŽ ู„ูŠุงู„ู ุทูˆุงู„ู
ุชู‚ุตู‘ุฑ ู‡ุฐูŠ ุงู„ู„ูŠุงู„ูŠ ุงู„ู‚ุตุงุฑู