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Though grey hairs punish blackness at my temples,

ุฅู† ุนุงู‚ุจ ุงู„ุดูŠุจ ุงู„ุณูˆุงุฏ ุจู…ูุฑู‚ูŠ

1. Though grey hairs punish blackness at my temples,
Dawn's radiance still follows the night.

ูก. ุฅู† ุนุงู‚ุจ ุงู„ุดู‘ูŠุจ ุงู„ุณู‘ูˆุงุฏูŽ ุจู…ูŽูู’ุฑู‚ูŠ
ูุงู„ู„ู‘ูŠู„ ูŠุชู„ูˆู‡ ุงู„ุตู‘ุจุงุญู ุงู„ูˆุงุถุญู

2. When the bow of destruction misses its mark
Some tresses and temples still whiten.

ูข. ู…ูŽู†ู’ ุฃุฎู’ุทูŽุฃูŽุชู’ู‡ู ูˆู‚ุฏ ุฑู…ุชู’ ู‚ูˆุณู ุงู„ุฑู‘ุฏู‰
ุชุจูŠุถู‘ู ู…ู†ู‡ ู…ูุงุฑู‚ูŒ ูˆู…ุณุงุฆุญู

3. Had the ignorant night any merit,
No lamps or wicks would lessen its gloom.

ูฃ. ู„ูˆ ูƒุงู† ู„ู„ู‘ูŠู„ู ุงู„ุจู‡ูŠู…ู ูุถูŠู„ุฉูŒ
ู„ู… ุชูุฏู’ู†ูŽ ู…ู†ู‡ ู…ู‚ุงุจูุณูŒ ูˆู…ุตุงุจุญู

4. Whiteness is a laughing face for the eyes,
Blackness a gloomy face for the eyes.

ูค. ุงู„ุจูŠุถู ู„ูู„ู’ุนูŠู†ูŠู†ู ูˆุฌู‡ูŒ ุถุงุญูƒู
ูˆุงู„ุณู‘ูˆุฏู ู„ู„ุนูŠู†ูŠู† ูˆุฌู‡ูŒ ูƒุงู„ุญู

5. Swifter than the trunks of chargers at full gallop,
More enduring than the pliant spearshaftโ€™s thrust.

ูฅ. ูˆุฃูŽุดุฏู‘ู ู…ู† ุฌูŽุฐูŽุนู ุงู„ุฌููŠุงุฏู ุฅุฐุง ุฌุฑุชู’
ุฌูŽุฑู’ูŠุงู‹ ูˆุฃุตุจุฑูู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽ ู†ูŽู‡ู’ุฏูŒ ู‚ุงุฑุญู

6. The tent ropes ambush the road though it be safe,
While searchers range the road for lost maidens.

ูฆ. ูˆุงู„ุจูุฒู’ู„ู ุชุบุชุงู„ู ุงู„ุทู‘ุฑูŠู‚ูŽ ุณู„ูŠู…ุฉู‹
ูˆุนู„ู‰ ุงู„ุทู‘ุฑูŠู‚ู ู…ู† ุงู„ุจููƒุงุฑู ุทู„ุงุฆุญู