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I gazed upon a male dove in a garden's center

نظرت إلى مكاء وسط حديقة

1. I gazed upon a male dove in a garden's center
Yearning for the sweetest of chains on a freshwater spring,

١. نَظَرتُ إِلى مُكّاء وَسط حَديقَةٍ
عَلى عَذبٍ يَرنو لِأَعذَبِ سَلسَلِ

2. As I saw him wandering through the garden
Suddenly he was struck down by the claws of a predator.

٢. فَبَينا تراهُ رائِداً في رِياضِها
إِذا هُوَ مَصروعٌ بِمَخلَب أَجدَلِ