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Longing overwhelmed me, so when it overflowed

برح بي الشوق فلما طغى

1. Longing overwhelmed me, so when it overflowed
I turned to the portrait, magnifying it

١. برَّحَ بي الشوقُ فلما طغى
فزعْتُ للرْسمِ فكبَّرُتهُ

2. It cured no illness, but rather
My heart complained of distance, so I justified it

٢. وما شفى داءً ولكنَّما
قلبي شكا البعدَ فعلَّلُتُهُ

3. And in the portrait I found none of her traits
I tried it for a while and tried it again

٣. ولم أجدْ في الرَّسمِ أخلاَقها
جرَّبتُها حيناً وجرّبتُه

4. Waiting for her in my room for ages
The generosity of a miser that I'm not used to

٤. منتظري في غرفتي دهرَهُ
جودُ بخيلٍ ما تعوَّدْتُه

5. It remained while I whispered to it by name
And didn't object when I kissed it

٥. ظلَّ وقد ناجيتُهُ باسماً
ولم يمانعْ حين قبَّلتُه

6. I recognized the painter's skill
And returned to the portrait, rejecting it

٦. عَرَفْتُ للرَّسام إبْداَعهُ
وعدتُ للرَّسمِ فانكرتُه

7. It lacked a glance I knew
In her, and a smile whose taste I savored

٧. قد فاته دَلٌّ تعرَّفْتُهُ
فيها ومَطْلٌ كم تذوَّقتُه

8. If the painter brought me the desired one
I would reject God and associate him

٨. لَوْ جاءَني الرسَّامُ بالمشتهى
كفرتُ باللهِ وأشركتُهُ