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I bear the burden of praise's adornment

وإني لذو بز من الحمد طرزه

1. I bear the burden of praise's adornment
Why do I see you today spurn my adornment?

١. وَإِني لَذو بزٍ مِن الحَمد طرزه
فَمالي أَراكَ اليَوم تَزهد في بَزّي

2. As if you wrote not to me openly
Without riddles in what you drafted or symbols

٢. كَأَنك لَم تَكتُب إِليّ مصرحاً
بِلا لغز فيما خَطَطت وَلا رَمز

3. I will be gentle in a coat of praise donning
By which is taken a while by plucking and then by shearing

٣. سَألطف في فَروٍ مِن الحَمد تَكتَسي
بِهِ يُقتَضى بِالنَتف طَوراً وَبالجَز

4. So it's taken from some people by kindness wooing
And it's taken from some people if opposed by invading

٤. فَيُؤخَذ مِن قَومٍ بِعَطفٍ تَودد
وَيُؤخذ مِن قَوم إِن اِعتاضَ بِالزز

5. None is left to oppose but you, so fulfill for me
For you, as you have reddened my face with resistance

٥. وَلَم يَبقَ مَن يَعتاض غَيرك فاقض لي
عَلَيكَ فَقَد أَخلَقت وَجهيَ بِالجَمز